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Saving Raven ch. 8

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Cyborg was exhausted. With BB’s help he was able to patch up Raven faster. He knew of BB’s feelings for Rae and Cy felt sorry for him. Leaving Beast Boy to keep an eye on Raven, he went to find Robin. When he looked on the couch he saw Robin with Star on his chest and they were sound asleep. “Robin, hey, Rob wake up,” he whispered not wanting to wake Star. Robin slowly opened his eyes. “Cyborg,” he said, “How’s Raven?” The half-robot looked at his leader grimly. “She’s stable, but I think you should see her.” Robin nodded and woke Starfire. Together the trio went to see their friend. Upon entering the room they were surprised to find a green cat curled up by Rae’s head asleep and purring. Robin ushered for Star to follow him into a room. Cyborg joined them a few moments later. “So,” started Robin, “How is she?” “Not good,” Cy replied. “We took some x-rays and they showed that she shattered her left elbow, broke both legs and cracked 5 ribs. Her ankle has 20 stitches all around and she has sever head trauma and burns. Worst of all…” he stopped. “Friend Cyborg,” Star prompted. “Worst of all, she isn’t healing herself,” he murmured.
i don't own the teen titans. i'm in school right now so progess is slow. this is story one of 4 so far
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I like where this story is going, the plot is interesting.

I've read up until this chapter, and I think if you add some more description about the atmosphere everyone is in, and maybe some more thoughts from the characters, you would have some longer chapters. Also, it would help to keep the reader's attention better.

Keep up the good work!